Friday, May 31, 2013

SHORT STORY: "Unlucky" By Christina Adepoju


  “Unlucky"
By Christina Adepoju

            At exactly 8:25am,  the school bell rang ,the sound of a death bell sounded through the hallways as the students sluggishly made their way to the auditorium to test for the next 3 ½ hours. Somewhere among the huge crowds of sophomores, Carlie and Shane managed to somehow find their way through the clump, making their way to the front of the massive group.

“Oh my gosh, how long is this going to take? Carlie exclaimed. “If people would just MOVE their feet instead of walking like penguins, then all of us would be able to get inside and take the stupid AP exam. Gosh, I can’t even breathe with all these people rubbing their skin against me.”
The shoving, the pushing and the clamoring were really irritating to Carlie and she found it annoying, but Shane found it amusing to poke fun at her claustrophobia.

“Wow, Carlie! It’s not even that bad,” he said. “Stop overacting over the slightest things, it’s not that big of a deal.”
 Carlie rolled her eyes and pretended to ignore him for the time-being. The administrators finally came around and opened the double doors, kind of like how a zoo-keeper opens a cage to capture the animals. As they walked in through the doors, the school administrators and proctors handed each of the students a chiseled, wooden # 2 pencil, a scantron, and the AP test booklet.  The fear in each and every one of those students began to arise as they received their materials, and made their way to their assigned desk, prepared to take the exam of their life. The administrators thought it would be encouraging if they posted posters with quotes like “ACE THAT EXAM” or “YOU can do it” as a way to “boost the students confidence in the exam.” It was nice of them, but it didn’t calm their nerves down.  It was funny to see how easily people got lost trying to look for the seat, because they went by alphabetical order. They were running like chickens without their heads.  Carlie was able to find her seat within no time, while Shane was walking around with a bunch of other students like little lost children, trying to find their way. Everything was awful in the auditorium; they gave the students broken chairs to sit on, where the back of it was broken into pieces, piercing through the student’s back as they sat back. Carlie was playing around, fiddling with her pencil and playing on the table while waiting for the administrators to give the instructions, when she felt something stick and gooey under her fingertips.
When she removed her fingers from under the table, she saw a huge, moldy, sticky wad of watermelon-scented gum. The contents of the gum were now stuck under her fingernails, and she could see the teeth indents in the gum from the person who chewed it, and left it so graciously under the table, as she tried to peel it off with the top of her eraser.

            Shane was able to locate his seat after wandering for about two minutes. His seat was directly across from Carlie, and started scribbling little notes on the desk as he waited.

            “Good luck, you’re going to do great,” he said in a whisper as he gave a thumbs-up.



Carlie laughed. “Hah, luck is for unbelievers, my darling. I don’t need luck, I got everything I need up here,” she said as she pointed towards her brain underneath her curly, brown mane.
         One of the administrators grabbed the microphone off the desk, tapping it before speaking into it and said, “Okay, students. This is the day you’ve been anticipating for! It’s time for the AP EXAM!!” Her words echoed through the auditorium as the students idle chatter quickly turned into a deafening silence.

            “Now, I know that all of you have worked “very” hard this school year, and I just want to let you know that I’m proud of each and every one of you, but remember to always, always do your best, no matter what,” she said gracefully.

            For the next ten minutes she began to read the instructions printed on the exam booklet. Out of all the administrators doing the proctoring, they picked the one who reads the slowest to read the instructions to the students. She would spit while talking, sending spitballs through the microphone and take really, deep breaths as she pronounced the words. It was complete torture and many of them wished to take the exam right then and there. Once she was done reading, she had to grab a small ladder to set the time on the alarm clock because of her short stature.

            “You have approximately 3 ½ hours to do this exam. Good luck,” she said.

These people don’t realize that luck is only for unbelievers, thought Carlie. But I’m for one, am a believer and I know that in my heart I’m ready for this exam.

            The clock began to tick, seconds slowly turned into minutes, and minutes turned to hours. One could dread what they were feeling in that testing room. The room felt icy and cold; their souls were nothing but clouds of mist because they were all mortified by what had taken place during the exam. You could hear the tiniest drop of sweat fall to the floor, boom like a canon piercing through the skies on the battlefield. Feet tapping, scribbling on paper, hesitation, rocking back and forth in the chair, all the signs of nervousness began to show on each and every one of their faces. Carlie had trouble getting past the first five questions, and looking at the clock wasn’t helping. It was only 30 minutes ago that they started. She looked around the room and began to scour to see her classmates. She looked at Shane, and saw how confident he looked; moving his pencil from left to right, quickly bubbling in the answers, his eyes glued to the booklet show that he was focused and determined, whereas Carlie had wandering eyes looking for a source of inspiration.

        Maybe if I just rest a little, I’ll stop stressing myself out and finish the exam, Carlie thought. All the late-night cramming and last minute study session had now begun to take a toll on Carlie, her eyes red and puffy, bags drooping underneath her eyes, and her constant yawning. She pushed back her materials and slowly put her head on the table, trying to make herself comfortable because the table felt like a bed of rocks. Her heavy eyelids soon followed after and knocked her into a tranquil, deep sleep. The next thing she knew, someone was shrugging at her shoulders.

“Miss Bacon, please wake up,” one of the administrators said.

She stretched out her arms in front of her and let out a big yawn.

“Okay, I think I’m ready for this exam!” she exclaimed. She noticed that her scantron, her scratch sheet of paper, and her pencils had been removed from her desk. Carlie was perplexed.

“Umm, where are my materials? I’m ready to finish the test,” she said

“The test is over,” exclaimed the administrator. “You slept through the entire exam.”

“How’s that possible? I only put my head down for 10 minutes.”
        The administrator motioned her hand towards the large timer clock that had laughed in the students faces. Carlie's  face became as pale as a ghost; the time said 12:30 when she laid her head down, and  now the time was now 3:45. In a state of shock and confusion, Carlie finally snapped back to realization and couldn’t help but blame herself.

“Please, please! May I please take it today or tomorrow? I can come in early tomorrow morning, like 6:00am! I didn’t get a chance to finish it!” she said.

The administrator shook her head. “Today was the only day to do it or make it up. Sorry. Next time, don’t fall asleep, especially during a major exam like the Advance Placement.”

Carlie then fell back on the table, banging her head over and over until it didn’t hurt anymore.

The empty seats and the buzzer began to haunt her as she walked down the hallway to the double-doors. As she approached them, she pushed it with so much force, that they flung wide open and hit the side of the wall, causing a few brick blocks to chip and fall off.

“That exam was easy, I mean it wasn’t hard as I thought it was going to be, but it wasn’t super easy, it was right in the middle. I’m glad it’s over with! How do you think you did,” asked Shane noticing Carlie's lack of disappointment.

“I’d rather not talk about it,” Carlie replied.

“Ok…you want to get some ice cream? My treat,” said Shane.

“Sure, that sounds great.”

Carlie couldn’t help but feel of sense of disappointment, but also humiliation. She was probably the only sophomore who fell asleep during the exam. What was worse is that she probably failed it since she only answered five questions and didn’t even get a chance to write the essays. But how could Shane, who knew nothing, feel so confident about a terrifying exam he didn’t even prepare for? Maybe luck is for believers.

(c) 2013 | Christina Adepoju

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